Continue the story with the girls coming across the camp obstacle course and them walking the course without actually engaging in the activities. Describe Whitney complaining about her poor Hokas which are only a few days old and how they are now black and are squishing with every step. How gross. She wiggles her toes to see muddy water come out the sides. Ugh. How could this happen?
As they near the end of the obstacle course they come to a large wooden contraption. It's like a raised garden bed, 12 feet by 12 feet with wooden platforms on either side big enough to hold a few people. When they stepped onto the platform, they understood what it was. The enclosure was filed with a good 12-18 inches of pure black mud with a rope running from one side to the other. "Oh, I see," said Heather, "I guess the kids try to get across by using the rope with their hands." Describe their conversation between the two of them on how many kids actually make it and whether either of them would attempt it. (Both gave an emphatic "no.")
Describe their conversation being interrupted when Joan arrived in her motorized cart. Describe Joan getting out of her cart and walking with determination to the platform where the girls stood. Describe her berating the girls for their muddy clothes and shoes asking them what happened. Describe each of their responses and apologies. Describe Joan's frustration with the two and their stained attire reminding them that the parent drop-off was starting in a few minutes and asks them what type of impression they thing they are going to make looking like pig farmers. Describe their responses and apologies.
Continue the story with Joan somehow falling from the platform into the mud pit without being pushed or pulled into the mud in her immaculate outfit and shoes. Describe how her own clumsiness causes this catastrophe. Describe her reaction when she starts to fall and then as she lay in disbelief in the mud.
With their shoes already less than pristine, Heather and Whitney stumbled upon the camp's obstacle course. While they weren't inclined to engage in any of the activities, they decided to walk along the edges and observe.
"Ugh, I can’t believe this—my new Hokas are ruined already!" Whitney complained, grimacing as she squished her feet into the mud with each step. The once-bright white shoes were now streaked with black and squished uncomfortably. She stopped, wiggling her toes to see muddy water oozing from the sides of her shoes. "How could this happen?" she exclaimed, shaking her head in disbelief.
The girls continued to walk, but Heather could see her friend's mood dampening as the squelching sounds of mud beneath Whitney's feet continued. "It’s just mud, Whit. At least they were only a couple days old," Heather reassured her with a hint of a smile.
As they neared the end of the obstacle course, they came across a large wooden contraption that looked like a raised garden bed, about 12 feet by 12 feet. Wooden platforms flanked each side, making it easy for several people to stand and observe.
When they stepped onto the platform, they understood its purpose: the enclosure was filled with about 12 to 18 inches of pure black mud, with a rope strung across from one side to the other.
"Oh, I see," Heather said, pointing at the rope. "I guess the kids try to get across by using the rope with their hands."
"I wonder how many actually make it without falling in," Whitney mused, taking a step closer to the edge and peering down into the muddy pit below.
"I bet it's not many," Heather replied, shaking her head. "And there's no way I'm trying it."
"Same here," Whitney agreed. "Just looking at it makes me feel like I’ll be in the mud again. No thanks!"
Their light-hearted discussion about the muddy obstacle was soon broken when Joan arrived in her motorized cart.
As she parked the cart and got out, there was a look of determination on her face. She marched toward the platform where the girls stood, her expression stern and unyielding.
"You two!" Joan called out, her voice ringing with authority. "What happened to you? You look like you’ve just rolled in a pigpen!"
Both girls exchanged nervous glances before Heather spoke up, attempting to sound innocent. "Uh, we may have had a small... incident with the mud on the trail."
Whitney chimed in, “It was just a little slip—"
Joan cut her off with a wave of her hand, her frustration evident. “A little slip? You’re both covered in mud! The parents are going to start dropping off the children in just a few minutes. What kind of impression do you think you’re making like this? You look like pig farmers!"
"We’re really sorry, Joan!" Heather exclaimed, feeling the heat rise in her cheeks. "We didn’t mean to get so messy. We’ll clean up as best we can."
"Yeah, we’ll do better!" Whitney added hurriedly, trying to appease their boss.
Joan shook her head, clearly frustrated. "This is no way to impress the parents. You need to clean yourselves up before they get here!"
But before either girl could respond, Joan took a step back to get a better view of them and miscalculated her footing on the platform. In an instant, she lost her balance, arms flailing as she fell backward into the thick, black mud below.
For a split second, her expression changed from shock to total disbelief as she plummeted into the pit, her immaculate lavender polo and pressed white shorts immediately submerged as she landed with a splash.
As she lay there, eyes wide and mouth agape, Heather and Whitney burst into laughter, unable to contain themselves. Joan's usual stern demeanor faded, replaced by a comical sight that they would remember for a long time, as she exclaimed, "Oh no! There goes my outfit!"
Retell the Joan sequence with a more detailed explanation of her immaculate outfit, including the Keds as she exits the cart and makes her way on to the platform. Describe the contrast between Joan's outfit and the mud that lay just below.
Have Joan fall in some other way than stepping backwards off the platform.
Describe how close Joan is standing to the edge. Does she acknowledge the adjacent mud? Describe her pristine Keds as Joan lectured the girls.
With their shoes already less than pristine, Heather and Whitney stumbled upon the camp's obstacle course. While they weren't inclined to engage in any of the activities, they decided to walk along the edges and observe.
"Ugh, I can’t believe this—my new Hokas are ruined already!" Whitney complained, grimacing as she squished her feet into the mud with each step. The once-bright white shoes were now streaked with black and squished uncomfortably. She stopped, wiggling her toes to see muddy water oozing from the sides of her shoes. "How could this happen?" she exclaimed, shaking her head in disbelief.
The girls continued to walk, but Heather could see her friend's mood dampening as the squelching sounds of mud beneath Whitney's feet continued. "It’s just mud, Whit. At least they were only a couple days old," Heather reassured her with a hint of a smile.
As they neared the end of the obstacle course, they came across a large wooden contraption that looked like a raised garden bed, about 12 feet by 12 feet. Wooden platforms flanked each side, making it easy for several people to stand and observe.
When they stepped onto the platform, they understood its purpose: the enclosure was filled with about 12 to 18 inches of pure black mud, with a rope strung across from one side to the other.
"Oh, I see," Heather said, pointing at the rope. "I guess the kids try to get across by using the rope with their hands."
"I wonder how many actually make it without falling in," Whitney mused, taking a step closer to the edge and peering down into the muddy pit below.
"I bet it's not many," Heather replied, shaking her head. "And there's no way I'm trying it."
"Same here," Whitney agreed. "Just looking at it makes me feel like I’ll be in the mud again. No thanks!"
Their light-hearted discussion about the muddy obstacle was soon broken when Joan arrived in her motorized cart.
As she parked the cart and stepped out, her pristine lavender polo shirt gleamed under the sunlight, the camp logo perfectly stitched on the left side. Her long white pressed shorts were impeccable, hugging her waist neatly, and her freshly polished white Keds, spotless and paired with clean white ankle socks, completed her polished look. The contrast between her immaculate outfit and the muddy terrain was stark, a clear representation of the camp’s ideals versus the reality of the situation.
With determination in her stride, Joan approached the platform where the girls stood, an authoritative look settling on her face. "You two!" she called out, her voice ringing with authority. "What happened to you? You look like you’ve just rolled in a pigpen!"
Both girls exchanged nervous glances before Heather spoke up, attempting to sound innocent. "Uh, we may have had a small... incident with the mud on the trail."
Whitney chimed in, “It was just a little slip—"
Joan cut her off with an irritated wave of her hand, her frustration evident. “A little slip? You’re both covered in mud! The parents are going to start dropping off the children in just a few minutes. What kind of impression do you think you’re making like this? You look like pig farmers!”
As she lectured them, Joan moved too close to the edge of the platform, oblivious to the slick black mud lurking just below. Her pristine Keds hovered perilously near the muddy rim, gleaming innocently against the dark backdrop.
"We’re really sorry, Joan!" Heather exclaimed, feeling the heat rise in her cheeks. "We didn’t mean to get so messy. We’ll clean up as best we can."
"Yeah, we’ll do better!" Whitney added hurriedly, trying to appease their boss.
Joan shook her head, clearly frustrated. "This is no way to impress the parents. You need to clean yourselves up before they get here!"
In her earnestness to reprimand the girls, Joan failed to maintain her balance as she gestured emphatically. Without realizing it, she leaned in a bit too far toward the edge, her foot slipping on the platform's edge.
In a chaotic twist of fate, she lost her balance, arms flailing in a desperate attempt to regain her footing. A moment later, a splash echoed in the air as she tumbled directly into the thick, black mud below.
For a split second, her expression changed from surprise to total disbelief as she sank into the pit, her immaculate lavender polo and pressed white shorts instantly submerged amid the dark muck.
As she lay there, eyes wide and mouth agape, the sight was unforgettable. Heather and Whitney could hardly contain their laughter, the image of their usually stern boss mingling with the absurdity of the situation as Joan exclaimed, “Oh no! There goes my outfit!”