Lauren asks Fiona to retell the story based on how well she knows Lauren from getting ready sitting in the mud.
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Fiona’s Retelling of the Muddy Disaster: The Sister Version
Lauren sighed, rubbing her temples as if that would erase the memory. “Okay, Fi,” she said, her voice drained but somehow still laced with impatience, “you know me. You know how this day went. I just... I need to hear it. From you. Retell it. From beginning to end. You're always so...
blunt.”
Fiona was already chuckling on the other end of the line. Lauren imagined her sister, feet up, phone propped on her shoulder, probably grinning like a Cheshire cat as she prepared to launch into one of her classic sarcastic narratives.
“Alright, alright,” Fiona started, clearly savoring the moment. “Let me see if I can do this justice. From the top, yeah?”
Lauren groaned, already regretting the decision. “You’re going to roast me, aren’t you?”
“Oh, absolutely,” Fiona replied without missing a beat. “But you asked for it. Here we go…”
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“
So, it starts,” Fiona said, using a dramatic, playful tone like she was narrating a Shakespearean tragedy, “with you waking up at some ungodly hour because you can’t just take a normal, relaxed photo—oh no—you
have to be out there
first thing in the morning, right when the light is the ‘perfect, ethereal glow,’ or whatever
Pinterest nonsense you call it.”
Lauren sighed into the phone. “It’s called the
golden hour—”
“I
know what it’s called, Lauren," Fiona interrupted. "I’ve lived with you during these ‘golden hours’ of yours, remember? So you’re bouncing around your room like the next Insta-celeb, probably testing three different hairstyles in the mirror, tweaking every outfit detail to preppy near-perfection. Like, your cardigan?”
“Right, the white one I told you about. It was
so cute—”
“Uh-huh, yes,
dear princess,” Fiona replied dryly. “So we’ve got the white cardigan—ironed to perfection, probably—oh, and the
green tennis skirt? Classic, by the way. Very ‘Lauren thinks she’s off to meet a prince at a garden tennis court.’ You’re all smiles, right? Looking in your mirror, texting Jake to remind him not to be late, smiling into a pretend camera—”
“I don’t smile into a
pretend camera,” Lauren interjected, doing her best to save some face.
“
Sure,” Fiona continued, her voice dripping with sarcasm. “Who needs an actual camera when you’re
mentally prepping your expressions, right?"
Lauren laughed in spite of herself, rolling her eyes. “Jake was late, though.”
“Ha! Knew it," Fiona said with a satisfied hum. "He drags himself out of bed, meanwhile you’re all but hopping into his car, practically vibrating with excitement, and probably giving him a two-minute crash course on the ‘vision’ for the day with your ‘totally chill’—but actually completely precise—Blue-Print-To-World-Domination.”
Lauren groaned at how accurately that portrayed her. “I was...” She paused, unable to find an excuse. “Okay, fine. Maybe I was a little intense.”
Fiona gave a teasing snort. “Uh,
yeah. You probably went on and on about ‘the aura’ the park was going to have that morning—something that’d match your Tretorns’
green stripe because, of course, every color needs to pop for the camera. And speaking of, let’s not forget you spent a good three minutes making sure the pompoms on your socks were
perfectly fluffed, didn’t you?”
Lauren couldn’t defend that. The pom details were sacred in her world.
“Anyway,” Fiona continued with a dramatic sigh. “You get to the park, probably assembling your followers in your head like you’re about to walk onto a runway. ‘This is the spot where the shoot will blow everyone away,’ you’re saying without saying. Poor Jake’s following you around like a whipped dog at this point, lugging around the camera, trying to get the best angles.”
Lauren felt a twinge of guilt but also couldn’t argue. Fiona wasn’t wrong.
“And
then,” Fiona continued, her voice picking up with obvious interest, “oh sweet Laur, you see some
gigantic log. I imagine your face going full ‘I’ve got a brilliant idea, Jake!’ as you assume the log is going to be your best friend for selfies and poses. Naturally, you’ve scoped out the flowers behind it, because God forbid a background doesn’t perfectly complement your outfit.”
“
It was a good backdrop!” Lauren defended, but Fiona powered through, barely able to suppress her laughter.
“Oh, I don’t doubt it. But here’s where it gets extra good,” Fiona said, now clearly relishing the retelling. “Jake is probably standing there, visibly trying to warn you—being like, ‘Hey, maybe not because there’s actual
mud here.’ He even tries to be the voice of reason about the swampy mess around the log.”
Lauren flinched slightly. “Well, yeah, but he didn’t stop—"
“But of course,” Fiona interjected, dramatically raising her voice to mimic Lauren, "'I’m fine, Jake! It’ll look amazing!' You're waving him off like, ‘don’t worry about it, I
know what I’m doing.’”
Lauren cringed remembering how confident she had been.
“So then, poor Jake’s practically carrying you up onto the log,” Fiona continued, “as you perch yourself up there like you’re about to pose in a
Vogue editorial. And I can just imagine you being all glowy with excitement, strutting back and forth along this balancing beam like, ‘Look at ME! I’m a preppy forest queen!’ doing your little turns, making sure your pompoms bounce
on cue. I mean, I bet you even did that thing where you show off your
shoes with a playful little ‘watch me twirl my foot’ move."
Lauren blushed. She
had done exactly that.
“You’re flying high, aren’t you?” Fiona cackled. “‘Oh, Jake, let’s take it live! The people need to see me
right now.’ I can already picture it… the world watching you teetering on a log like some woodland ballerina.”
Lauren’s voice was soft now. “They... were super into it.”
“
Until,” Fiona broke in with dramatic pause, “you try to seal the deal with a
little curtsy, because of course you’d think that’d be the cherry on top of your dream-girl aesthetic."
“Fiona…”
“Lauren… let’s be real. You went for the curtsy.
On a log. In front of everyone.”
Lauren groaned loudly. “Okay, okay. Fine. I overdid it.”
“
Oh boy, did you overdo it." Fiona’s laughter was barely contained. "So there you are, teetering on that log like some cartoon character—arms out to save yourself, but
oh no—gravity isn’t having it. And then, just like in the movies, BAM. Into the... what was it?
Mud pit? Oh right. Mud
swamp. The whole time the live feed is
still running, your followers watching you dive headfirst into the muck in slow motion.”
“Fiona…” Lauren cringed, unable to stop her sister’s relentless impersonation of the event.
“And let’s not forget the best part,” Fiona added with a snide chuckle. “You’re just sitting there, covered in mud, your pristine
Tretorns—the ones you showed off moments before—
drenched in mud. And your poor pompoms, the victims of this tragic tale, reduced to sad, wet blobs.”
“They were completely ruined…” Lauren lamented dramatically, almost in tears at that part of the story.
“Oh, I’m sure they were tragic,” Fiona teased. “But then, your face… oh, I can just picture it. That sweet ‘influencer glow’?
Gone, replaced with pure, unfiltered
rage. The kind of rage only a preppy girl who just fell into a mud pit—and more importantly, did it LIVE—can feel.”
"Fi, it was mortifying. The comments... the screenshots...”
“Oh, I bet there are memes of it already,” Fiona snorted.
Lauren shook her head in disbelief. "Thanks for that, by the way..."
“And poor Jake!” Fiona added. “Standing there helpless while you
screeched at him because he
didn’t stop the feed fast enough. Like that detail was going to reverse time and save your precious white cardigan.”
Lauren let out a long, frustrated groan, throwing herself face down into her pillow as Fiona’s laughter exploded through the phone.
“Oh, Laur,” Fiona finally managed between snickers. “You can’t expect me to keep a straight face when your days go like this.”
“It was a nightmare, Fi…”
“Nah,” Fiona said, warm and reassuring now. “It was a hilarious nightmare. The kind we both know you’ll get over... and, let’s be honest, it’s a
little funny, right?"
Lauren hesitated, a small smile creeping up despite herself. “Okay,
maybe it’s a little funny.”
“
A lot funny,” Fiona corrected, snickering one final time.
“Fine, a
lot funny.” Lauren sighed, feeling a weight lift.
“Better call it ‘Preppy Falls: The Swamp Chronicles,’” Fiona teased.
“Goodbye, Fiona,” Lauren said, laughing as she ended the call, blushing well into the evening as her sister’s retelling echoed in her mind.